Mi Duvrai ne Parhaa

Ibuo levi sicpai ga katli ro stobii bulva sui jio le tricu ga nu bekylinmao via bei {/gui}, ice ba groda publai, e nu namci li, Marks Publai, lu.

I am assuming here that APL wished to attach the part about the park to levi sicpai, rather than the lined-up trees, so the jio clause should be terminated with gui for this to happen

Ibuo le piplo je la Xi,as no pa nu treci le socdrekao, e {/,}no pa kacycea le mela Karl Marks namci

Without the comma after e, enopa becomes a single word. To be fixed in resolver LIP

Nao io tu togri lepo la Loglandias pa kincle hapvia la Marks {/guo}, ji dreti

Without the guo, the ji dreti modifies la Marks, instead of the entire lepo clause.

I la Ityn Cmamoa {/ga}bilplu sicpai.

ga or comma.

Nao mi viadri ne virta ji nu ridle lie {,/}vei Hisfui, ne bkr parhaa.l 5ri Fdbs. Balko. Lufta. Sisu 200 b/mea. Sni Satlis Rande. Tel: 551642, vei

The comma interferes with the matching of the vei components of the strong quotation. The first flag should immediately follow the lie.

I {,/}va {/,}mi tovneagoi le nendertre, e godzi la Satlis Rande.

The first comma is OK, but two commas around va seems extravagant, and a successful parse is made without it. The va is not modifying mi, but standing alone, so the comma is needed to indicate this

Leva sicpai ga katli ri bulva ji ginkaa la Tcomskis Kursia {gui}, e {/ji}clika lo tarci barma

The gui is optional, but the ji is not. Otherwise the e clika... is attached to ga katli instead of the bulva,

Nao, le me lio tovofe nurbai {pa/ga}groda, e {melylaldo lio sanemanei/heknie lio sanema}

The suggested changes follow previous examples. Presumably the building was and is groda, so ga is more suited. me lio tovofe turns the argument lio tovofe into a predicate to modify nurbai. I would have preferred le nurbai ji katli lio tovofe (the building characterized by the number 285). The other change is optional and uses the more recent method of dealing with dimensioned numbers.

I tu no fa kinclefio vi, ikou mi siflii go ganfordynursia , e {/,}fa pifno vizgoi tu

To avoid efa instead of e fa

I mi tsodi lo pu labyredro {/guo}, e gurfia la Fum Qatcyr

Without the guo, gurfia links to labyredro instead of tsodi

Ikuo ro junti ge mendi stude pe le rorpebkea gu, plipei le parhaa, Qai

Note that the use of gu and pause here remove the need to use ga before plipei, but it is recommended anyway.

La Huvr {/ga}siltu konoi leHai tilba ki leHai hedto, iu, e tongytco lemi hanco.

ga or comma, as usual

Nao la Elvis papa bivdia la Huvr, lopo dzoru go clesi je ra liurkoe {/guo}ice Hai gudbiu dzoru go nedza je mi.

I suppose that it still makes sense to have the ice clause as part of the lopo clause, but I think it goes better with bivdia

I la Huvr {/ga}hapci pleprano nia ri minta.
The usual.

Fa lepo la Huvr papa tulylufta ri tricu {/guo}, miu fangoi la Lu,is Karyl Kursia, le publai, ne notbi rutma.
guo needed for correct parse.

I la Huvr {/ga}sutyduvrai lo cmalpiu je lo tcidi, va lo tobme.
ga, if no comma after Huvr.